The Muse: Her Presence Poem by Daniel Brick

The Muse: Her Presence

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This morning, in the gray light
of early winter, I was promised
a poem. 'It's waiting for you, '
she said softly. 'Look for it
in familiar places near home.
Not that distant home of your origins,
but the one close by, that has served
you so well, in these years if endeavor. And-'
And she had departed, in the middle of
a thought. It's almost a routine by now:
she is summoned by another poet, perhaps
like myself, perhaps not. I don't know -
How many poets does she attend? How does
she determine her visitations? Does she
check names - This is useless and unworthy.
I'm acting like a cast-off lover, a jealous
one, a hurt one... I will soon fulfill
this morning's promise: the poem, already
half written, lies face-down on the table.
What else is there to consider. Oh, yes,
it is the lingering scent of her presence.

Wednesday, December 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 15 December 2016

EXCELSIOR! ;) And.. what about an introduction, too? :)

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Fabrizio Frosini 14 December 2016

this poem of yours fits nicely with the theme of the next Anthology: ''Ode to the Arts''.. what do you think? ;)

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Daniel Brick 14 December 2016

Yes, I think so too. I wrote it as a fragment of thought, unfinished and rough, not a clearly thought out esthetic position but rather an immediate reaction on the poet's part to the muse's unreliability.

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Liza Sudina 24 December 2015

If I had your problems… - as my former boss used to say. Do you like your muse? Do you miss it? Ann Akhmatova said she would wish to enemy the fate of a poet. May be her muse hurt her. She said it was like a fever. It’s described in her poem: “When at night I wait her coming”.

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