The Naked Reality Poem by Chinmayee Panda

The Naked Reality



Baseless bondage & ties dead, Still an endless journey, a ray of hope,
A veineffort I had............
This is life cried my conscience
But countless queries haunted my mind.......
What is mine & who is mineI yelled n yelled.
No response except d echo of that line.........................................
Started with flamboyant celebrations, it ends up with melancholy,
Again I broodedn brooded to decipher its meaning..............

Thursday, April 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: melancholy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 19 April 2018

ends up with melancholy, good write

0 0 Reply
Robert Murray Smith 19 April 2018

A very good write as your first poem on this site. However, do not abbreviate to such an extent. Also, correct spelling errors.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success