The Naked Truth Poem by topaz africa

The Naked Truth

Rating: 4.5


my heart my soul my being
have tried to reason with you
tried to spare me of such feelings
feelings that never go away
what feelings are these so uncontrolable
who decide for me to feel this way
what spirit is this so powerful
that seems to be pulling me to you
im drawn to you
like paper is to pen
im attracted to you
like magnet is to metal
im into you
like fish is to water
you inside me
like the blood running through my veins
you under my skin
and there you will remain


23/10/2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 06 May 2008

Must be love you feel, do not hold it let it go! You will make someone happy, as happy as you will be! Splendid poetry, high marks.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 31 October 2007

Nobody teaches the fish to swim?

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