The Nature Poem by Moxie De Lucky

The Nature

Rating: 5.0


Just like natural fountain
And the burning ice at the mountain
which bear the frost rain
Resembles your lovely eyes curtain.

When the breeze unveil their love
To the jungles's dove
So your pleasing voice deserve
Deserve to heal me when i'm starve

Thursday, October 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gulzar Hussain Ranjoor 06 June 2021

Nice

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 December 2019

So your pleasing voice deserve Deserve to heal me when i'm starve.. fineness in your thinking. love it. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 December 2019

To the jungles's dove So your pleasing voice deserve Deserve to heal me when i'm starve.. lovely expressions dear poet. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 October 2018

When the breeze unveil their love To the jungles's dove So your pleasing voice deserve Deserve to heal me when i'm starve - - - your pleasing voice has healing power..... love expressed in a fine way, in original tones.. tony

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Moses Juma 20 October 2018

Thanks Dr.tony.. God bless you

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Chinedu Dike 18 October 2018

Well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Moses.

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Moses Juma 20 October 2018

Thank you Chinedu Dike for reading and your appreciation as well

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