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(28 nov 1987 / Bhubaneswar)

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The Night I Cried

The night i cried
You weren't anymore there
Tears were heavy
No one asked me to share.

The night i cried
I cried whole night
Thinking of u my love
tears didn't stop a while.

The night i cried
I didn't want to cry
But i cried all night
still didn't know why.

The night i cried
I didn't wipe out my tears
I let them flow away
With the pain i preserved for years.

The night i cried
I silently sang something
That made me miss you more
Even more than i ever did.

The night i cried
My eyes couldn't sleep
My mind was going on asking me
Why i went so deep....

Submitted: Monday, November 02, 2009


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  • Indira Babbellapati (11/6/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    i think it's not a bad expression...as you keep writing, it's sure to get better...trust me!

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  • Amitava Chakrabarty (11/2/2009 3:13:00 AM)

    A great endeavor for a new poet. Write on.....

  • Sara Tehrani (11/2/2009 2:24:00 AM)

    Im going to be honest as I think its no good giving compliments hat you dont mean it wont help the poet! so to begin with the poem to me was not very original and I nearly left this page before finishing it! however it started to pick up and get better from 3rd verse. I also carried on reading because i can really relate to this and many other people will too, however your grammar and vocabulary is a little weak. I think you have great potential though. Im no pro, i have alot of weak poems too so i you wish to read any please dont hesitate to be honest with your opnions. I hope mine help :)

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