The Oath Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

The Oath

Rating: 5.0


The earth is turned to a battlefield
Fierce war is being fought.
A legion of Invisible novel terminators
Have unleashed attack against
Billions of unarmed human beings.
Let us take the sword and swear
We will march forth, not to retreat,
Nor to sheath the swords
until the last of the enemy is slain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 April 2020

A powerful write well conveyed. The last four lines can fuel the mind to rise and join the war. A great oath well written.

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The war against our enemy Kovid 19 being decisive with respect to the fatality aspect I feel it to be gallantry to loin feelings of well wishers of humanity. Thank you very much

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2022

I sincerely appreciate this creditable piece of poetry on topic of high significance on social issues.

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Thank youverymuch dear Dr. Dillip. However the enemy has set to retreat. We must see the last of them flee

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2022

Typo: topic

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2022

Absolutely brilliant. I sincerely appreciate this creditable piece on a top of importance. Top score.

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Valsa George 25 April 2020

Yes, this is a relentless fight against a formidable enemy! Though thousands may fall dead on the battlefield, there is no going back! We will fight until the invisible enemy is completely vanquished! Love this beautiful small poem!

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Thank you very much dear friend. Let the war continue till we are victorious against the evils of this unscrupulous villain

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 April 2020

O to fight against an invisible foe, but fight we must, debt to humanity we owe. inspiring piece

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Thank you Pathakji very much for the encouraging comments. We are bound to care for the society. Let us hope for the best. LOKA SAMASTHA SUKHINO BHAVANTU

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