The Ocean Poem by Julia Luber

The Ocean

Rating: 5.0


The water is all around me, dressing me with its motion,
movement, salt. The sensicality of existence is astounding
and dominant when it is told by the story of water, the ocean,
obviously life's precious, earth's blue and salty blood.

Saturday, July 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beach
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Feeling at home in the ocean.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 20 July 2019

Dressed by the ocean you are carried in its waves.

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Julia Luber 20 July 2019

I imagine a more poetic and complex poem about the ocean could have occurred to me- longer and deeper, but this is the one I wrote for now.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 July 2019

A lovely poem, dear Ma’am Julia......10++++

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