The Old Man Poem by John Rickell

The Old Man



The Old Man
The old man before the fire
Slumped and comfortable
pale blue bright eyes
Staring to the past
Fine lines confirme a
wit of keenest edge,
and kindness sealed it all.
Tranquil, thoughtful
And ninety five
Tick tock tick tock tick tock
Went the clock
Lub-dub, lub-dub, lub-dub,
The heart replied.
Grandfather's and father's clock
Tall impassive measurer of time
Tapping out the pace of time
Recording not a moment.
Dictating, unchallenged
How long time seems to be.
He turned his thoughts
Upon the clock,
never known to be late, or stop..
Tick-tock -tick-tock-tick-tock
Lub-dub, lub-dub, lub-dub
each had shared the room
Playing a double fugue
Lub-tock, dub- tick, tock-lub, tic- lub,
Other hearts had joined
Young and old played minuets
Waltzed and polked across the rugs
And through the door.
Times have changed,
Beats a little quicker
But little else.
John had lived a useful life,
family had success through him,
Emily gone these last ten years
Richard had a grandchild
(He was sixty five)
Enigmatic June had gone a broad
Strange June........
Strange like him.
'I miss June....had guts'
'She never writes'
'But then I don't'

“Ah, well time for bed”
Damp down the fire
Put out the cat and light
Close up the cupboard
Leave everything tidy.
' Ninety five's a grand old time'
The old knees not what they were.
but old habits keep them supple
'Our Father which art in Heaven'
Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock...
Lub-dub, lub...............
Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock.

Wednesday, April 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: family
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Lacovara 02 April 2014

What a fine balance, the clock ticking, the heart beating....All your characters coming to life in a portrait that hangs in many a home. Your words reminding us of the fragility of aging and the wisdom that comes with all the habits that make our time fly. I absolutely loved it! PEACE

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