The Origin Of Life And Earth Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen
The Origin Of Life And Earth
The clouds move gently
And join them together
Then makes them into stack
The rain comes out of it
Man is created by
the extract of clay
Firmly fixed as a drop
In a place of settlement
Then drop into a leech
suspended things and blood clot
It becomes a chewed like substance
the creation by our Lord!
He turned to the havens
When it was smoke
Havens and the earth
were connected entity
And separated after -
-Shaleheen,17th April,2013
well i think it is a brilliant thinking, the own imagination of how the world must have been created......just brilliant and beautiful
Not bad but such themes require grandeur trratment...... You u have to bring that diction and syntax and even tone that appropriate to such themes ........... divinity ought to be veiled in sublimity..... Keep doing good job
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 11:36:24 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A great description of how the world was created, you have a great imagination delivered with panache!