The Padded Room Poem by Joe Hughes

The Padded Room



It's just my eye that you can see,
Come closer now, can you see me?
I'm locked in here against my will,
They tell me I am very ill.
It's just my eye that you can see,
I've been in here since half past three..........

I've been in here six hours so far,
I have to pee in a urine jar.
The floor is padded, so are the walls,
No one hears my plaintive calls.
I've been in here six hours or more,
I think I'll be here twenty four...............

Two days have passed, I know the score,
Injections - I've had four or more.
There's nothing here for me to do,
The nursing staff's a motley crew.
Two days have passed, I know the score,
I'm claustrophobic and I'm sore.

My head's a maze of mad ideas,
Of manic thoughts and paranoid fears.
They found me naked in the rain,
I stabbed a guard on a Connex train.
My head's a maze of mad ideas,
But no one sees my inner tears.

It's just my eye that you can see,
But as a child - yes, one of three,
Abused and used - to prison driven,
I spent a life with crime most ridden.
It's just my eye that you can see,
Two days have passed and now it's three............

(The padded cell has a one way eye viewer
for staff use..)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 04 July 2016

The poem is an excellent portrayal of feelings of some one kept away in a prison cell, lonely, fearful , paranoid and, claustrophobic.He has been kept aloof in a padded cell.To the outer world only his eyes are visible and no one can see his inner tears. The poem attempts an analysis of the reason that made a child criminal and the resultant sufferings.

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Joe Hughes 01 February 2017

Bharati' This poem is about the locked padded room in a refractory ward in a psychiatric hospital. The subject is a patient and not a criminal and the content is about the unfortunate psychiatric events in his life. Regards, Joe

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Rajnish Manga 04 July 2016

The poem is an effort to introspect and to analyze one's experiences. I quote: My head's a maze of mad ideas, Of manic thoughts and paranoid fears. But no one sees my inner tears.

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Tirtho Banerjee 04 July 2016

Outstanding. It is as deep as the ocean. Congrats

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Christine Kerr 28 March 2009

I really enjoyed this one, The mind is such a powerful thing and it is great that you have put yourself into this closed in situation with such poetry. beautifully done Joe.

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Fiona Davidson 30 January 2009

I found this to be a very poignant write....a lot of insight used in your words...must come from your training...good striong write...thank you...Fi...10+++

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