Its dark I cant breath someone help me,
it hurts so much and I just cant make it stop,
it fells like I'm floating,
wait what’s that voice I here form somewhere in the darkness,
I open my eyes only to find I cant see out of one,
I want to lay down, leave me alone,
I smell smoke and taste blood.....blood! ? ,
I jerk up to see I was in a crash,
what's this pain in my head why dose it hurt to move? ,
suddenly it fills as if I'm being dragged,
I look up to find my friend is dragging me away and keeping me awake,
next thing I know I'm in an ambulance,
I fall asleep,
they do some test,
later I wake up to find I had been asleep for 2 days,
make this pain stop pleas,
how did this happen and why to me?
great poem, very touching, bad things happen to everyone we just have to keep going, great write
That was really good. Very descriptive you almost feel like your there. Great write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh, very nice senes and have deep heart.good and salute u much....