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maria sudibyo

(280883 / parist van java)

The Partner

I will take you
To the place you want to bloom
Just give me time
To pass the line
Of me and you

I will give you
Everything you lost in blue
Just bring me clue
To make it true
In dawn hue

What we are crying for
Sometimes it’s hard to live this way
But we could find laughter
In the end of grueling day

What we are searching for
Sometimes we going out nowhere
But someday we’ll understand
The calling of this strange emotion

I will show you
The dream you never thought you could
Just hold my hand
And cross the land
Of thousand chances

I will hold you
Won’t let anything hurt you
Just say what you want
And please allow
Me to stay

What we are trying for
Sometimes it’s hard keeping the faith
But we could be stronger
Because hope would never leave

What we are waiting for
Sometimes to the point of patience
But if we still desire
Maybe it’s time to take a turn

I will love you
Like no one else would do
Just be what you are
Don’t change for someone
Who doesn’t care

I will need you
To be the light of my life
Just feel me now
In falling snow
And you’ll know

What we are hiding for
Sometimes it’s hard to face the truth
But we could be better
If we could look inside the heart

What we are fighting for
Sometimes it’s useless to struggle
But we never know how
The destiny decide to intervene

Submitted: Sunday, January 01, 2012
Edited: Monday, January 02, 2012

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