The passing years bring about experience
With experience comes a little understanding
Learning to speak less when we mean less
And to mean more in minimum words
Touchable words to name the simple things
A hard stone, a true love, a wise man….
A true stone, a hard man, or to love wisely-
Glory of passing years is beautifully illustrated in your poem.
lungelo you just took the truth and put it on paper, nice write
Lungelo, parsimonious use of words to great effect indeed. Saying more with less is a sign of poetic greatness. Rgds, Ivan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
We should all learn from our mistakes, growing older should always be fun and like you say say our experience then tells us what to do. Bob