Gioom Galen

Rookie (Georgia)

The Passion Pretends... - Poem by Gioom Galen

The passion pretends,
The breeze accompanies leaves,
Causing whisper


Comments about The Passion Pretends... by Gioom Galen

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (5/24/2008 2:40:00 PM)

    Hi Gi, It is the good haiku...
    Kindest regards,
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  • Rookie - 460 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (5/23/2008 10:43:00 PM)

    and the love happens to ha[ppen by the swing
    as the leaf sways with the blue hue of the sky...........well penned, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Austen Bradford (5/22/2008 3:45:00 PM)

    Very pretty the words kind escaped my lips as i read it out loud (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 22, 2008



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