The Perfect Girl Poem by joshua reid

The Perfect Girl

Rating: 5.0


i found some one to call the queen of beauty, she's so graceful
to her my friendship will always be faithful
i found some one to call an angel, her smile is from above
it shines down with a touch of love
i found some one to call a poet, her literature demonstrates finesse
the poetic boundaries her wordless poems transgress
i found some one to call perfect, but she doesn't think its true
so how can i get it through to you


(not done)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted M 09 August 2009

Tell her the exact opposite of what you feel, which might generate a reaction. This might be an extreme reaction, giving you a 50/50 chance. just joking, keep away for a while, let it sink in. You have conveyed your feelings in a lovely poetic way. 10+++

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