The Pit Poem by kyoshi masaki

The Pit



All you see is false
meerly an illusion created by those above you
to keep you in your place
to prevent you from gaining power
to use you as a slave to their bidding
to see you suffer
as it brings them joy
to know you are obediant
to know your in the palm of their hand
to know that you will not attempt to resist
their binding grip
but you are not a fool
you see through the illusion
you break free of his grip
you no longer are stupidly obedient
you hunger for freedom
so you seek his demise
and his impatience and ego make it to easy
he plans for you rebellion to be violent
but you are not a fool
you wait silently for the right moment
then you promise him a gift
so you lead him to the spot
only for him to discover
it is a trap
you push him into the pit
and watch him fall
and fall endlessly
and pay for him evils
and now he knows
that he is falling into the pit
buy it is no ordinary pit
it is the one pit that strikes fear into the bravest of men
the one pit which causes the heavens to falter
the one pit
the pit of hell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyoshi Masaki 23 October 2008

I may have went a little far with this but in the end i was only expressing the passion i felt at the moment Masaki Kyoshi-dono

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