The Planets.. Poem by Gotita Shukla

The Planets..

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Mercury is too hot,
while venus has a drouht.
Mars is red,
Where everyone is dead.
We got birth,
From mother earth.
Jupiter is the biggest,
Also the thickest.
Saturn, full of rings;
Let us fly around it with wings.
Uranus and Neptune are too cold,
for everyone to be bold.
And the sun, the hot ball of fire,
O Please! trust me, am not a liar.

Wednesday, March 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,space,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 March 2018

Let us fly around it with wings.......o please trust me...... nice poem. at the end i really smiled.. thank you d ear poet. tony

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