(13.12.1955 / howrah)

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The Prodigy of error

Lord Krishna said
fire without smoke
action without defects
are unexpected.

that is what we do
there must be error
sometime error yields to creation
some time to devastation

Creation of universe
as physicist says
is the yield of big bang
i can not say, if
it was an error by God
but the result is fruitful
creation of universe
so we are

despite of prohibition by God
Adam and Eve
ate the apple
consequence, they were thrown to earth
and the entire world is created
you and me also

Rama is known as avtar of Lord Vishnu
who is permeating the nature
he ran behind Mayamrigya
advising Laxman to protect his beloved wife Sita
in his leaf cottage in forest
suddenly Laxman heard a cry
Sita forced him to go to save Ram
Laxman sketched Laxman rekha
requested not to cross the Laxman rekha
Sita crossed Laxman rekha to give alms
to Ravan in guise of a priestly beggar
Ravan kidnapped her
Ravan was a great scholar
He knew that Ram is the avtar of Lord Vishnu
but still he fought against Ram
Do you not find error
in action of each character

Lord Krishna is also said to be same avtar
but he did not stop the war of Mahabharat
and all character of Mahabharat committed some mistake
so the war of Mahabharat is also
consequence of error

Sir Isaac Newton thought
apple falling from tree
should go on sky
a child can think this
or a man of error mind can think
but this thought lead him to
invention of Laws of Gravitation

After devastation of
Hiroshima & Nagasaki
Sir Eisenstein might have accepted his error
for invention of his theory

If America had taken care of
the twin tower had not happened

Do you not think
all these are the effect of some error

Similarly, one after another
error is taking place
some time it is creating
some time it is devastating

All person and Super person
are making error
sometime they are creating
some time they are destroying

I am a Railwayman
wants to be very sincere to my job
also have an error in mind
for invention of one train
that can reach New york from Calcutta
within an eye drop
is it not error?

Is it not so
this world is Prodigy of error.

Submitted: Saturday, October 01, 2011
Edited: Saturday, October 29, 2011


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