The Pure Burning Soul Poem by Naila Rais

The Pure Burning Soul

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Your love, your words are to be proud
For making someone live a life
Taking away that cruel depression
And making the tree feel proud

The swiftness of the running rivers
With the loads of love and joy
May you reach your destination
That success accompany you

Your kindness fly high and high
With the leaflets of consoling
The tears that ran down my eyes
Seeing your heartfelt gratitude

Even the dawn bow down at you
Feeling the silence of your laughter
Eagerly waiting dusk of glory
For you to change someone's life

The departure of your love and joy
Will turn the earth upside down
For the one who are proud of you
And the birds who are depend on you

May your every quest be fulfilled
May you live young forever
At the bottom of your heart
There lies a deep piece.

Friday, March 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: friends,friendship,missing you,sisterly love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to Yashmitha.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 14 July 2020

The swiftness of the running rivers With the loads of love and joy May you reach your destination That success accompany you. you are so one with the nature. wish you well for writing such great poems. tony

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 May 2020

A lovely tribute in gratitude to a friend or sister. You express nicely in a fine poetic way. Thumbs up and keep it up. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too, titled, ' miraculous birds seen in sacred sanctuary'

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 April 2020

dedication is par excellence does it mean what I think and a cause of silence poetess since you have stopped reaching my pages

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Kostas Lagos 20 March 2020

A lyrical beauty! Excellent

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 March 2020

A well composed lovely poem......10+++++

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