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Jeffrey McDaniel
(1967 / Philadelphia, Pennsylvania)
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  In an effort to get people to look
into each other's eyes more,
and also to appease the mutes,
the government has decided
to allot each person exactly one hundred
and sixty-seven words, per day.

When the phone rings, I put it to my ear
without saying hello. In the restaurant
I point at chicken noodle soup.
I am adjusting well to the new way.

Late at night, I call my long distance lover,
proudly say I only used fifty-nine today.
I saved the rest for you.

When she doesn't respond,
I know she's used up all her words,
so I slowly whisper I love you
thirty-two and a third times.
After that, we just sit on the line
and listen to each other breathe.


Jeffrey McDaniel

Submitted Date Thursday, July 14, 2005
Submitted Date Friday, February 15, 2008



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Sally Carter (5/10/2009 3:12:00 PM)
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I love this one too. Surreal and thought provoking.
Tess Bybee (5/10/2009 1:35:00 PM)
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This is very good. I love it.
Gena Boulay (5/2/2008 6:03:00 PM)
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I loveeee Jeffrey McDaniel :)
john tiong chunghoo (3/31/2008 4:51:00 AM)
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a great poem with a new concept. lovely jeffrey. keep going.
Carla Castillo (5/27/2006 9:38:00 PM)
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i absolutely love your poems.
every single one of them make me feel like im apart of something great while im reading them
Please email me so we can talk.
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Raynette Eitel (7/14/2005 1:31:00 PM)
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This is an interesting thought...and an interesting solution. What's a poet to do?
Good work.

Raynette
Anong All (7/14/2005 12:55:00 PM)
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Very sweet poem. l enjoyed reading
Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari (7/14/2005 12:48:00 PM)
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Very sweet poem...I enjoyed it.

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