The Rivers Of Dreams Poem by Fatmir Terziu

The Rivers Of Dreams

Rating: 5.0


I jump over rivers
In the middle of the night
I walk straight through them
I face the slush the mud
Even though I do not believe my eyes

The rivers of dreams
I have set off to rest
Tired, hostage at midnight
I swim continuously and without rest between them.

Endless water in my dreams
Rivers that flow endlessly
Then loneliness is combed
Every meditation begins.

My rivers never sleep
They have gifted me their attributes
Even in the dark well of night they find me
New roads to challenge.

The rivers have been wild for some time
In the my dreams in winter nights
I do not know how to quieten them
Maybe, a return to youthful dreams.

Tuesday, February 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 March 2018

It's a sparkling piece of poetry! I find a liquid movement from top to bottom! Lucidity of poetic expression makes it endearing! My favorite lines: The rivers of dreams/I have set off to rest/Tired, hostage at midnight/I swim continuously and without rest between them....Very commendable piece of work! I vote the poem with a 10

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Nudershada Cabanes 27 February 2018

Vivid imagery wonderfully woven.10

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Fatmir Terziu 28 February 2018

Thank you for your time and comment. I appreciate. Best of luck.

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Chinedu Dike 27 February 2018

A work of an active imagination, well articulated and nicely brought forth. A beautiful creation Fatmir. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Fatmir Terziu 28 February 2018

Many thanks Chinedu Dike. I wish you the best of luck.

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Joshua Adeyemi 27 February 2018

'The rivers of dreams I have set off to rest Tired, hostage at midnight I swim continuously and without rest between them.' Thanks for sharing. Joshua.

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Fatmir Terziu 28 February 2018

Thank you. Best selection, a choice of art. Best of luck to you.

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Fatmir Terziu

Fatmir Terziu

Elbasan, Albania
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