Post more comments
Want a gift card for being active Forum member? Post comments and win $25 gift card every week.
Rules: will be giving away gift cards (worth $75 in total) every week to first three members ($25 each) who participate most in our forum discussions. You just have to post comments on forum pages, poet pages or poem pages anywhere inside
Comments posted needs to be in different pages. Posting more than 1 comment on the same page will only be counted once.
Members can not post comments without being logged in. has the right to cancel or edit this contest. has a right to disqualify or ban member(s) without providing any type of reason, belief or proof in regards to any type of illegal activity or fraud.

Theodora (Theo) Onken

(Washington State)

The Ruthless~

They call themselves Warriors...
But believe drugs and greed are their core
A conspiracy(ring) of like minded for too many years
Who always seem to want much, much more;

Their you sit seemingly stoic in your 'Darkness'
Brazen as the day is long...
Sharpening your talons for yet another day
Of this ever continuing WRONG! ;

Conjuring up much more wickedness - underhanded
Perhaps to ply upon your test examples 'few'
Hoping to alter, yet again, their brain receptors
Into 'falling' actions that please 'all of you';

I remember YOUR words back in 2005 - dear spokeswoman
You stated i would: 'fall again'
A Bournemouth native - lover of 'fluffy bunnies'
You have always been out to win via the route of sin! :

What with your around the globe drug trade
And your business of trying to alter - we, the few
With a lot of help from your 'ELF-LIKE buttons...
Keeps you busy with your: SHIRT -like Brew! ! !

Would it surprise you to know doll
That we have garnered all of the names
Of the rest of the actors in your long crime spree
In this way too long lasting: 'Other Peoples Money' game?

For you see the 'RIGHT' people have put two and two together
Connecting the dots from your part of the world to different states
California, Minnesota, Connecticut, to name but a few
Believe that your posted clues are a bit too late! ! ;

YOU are now in the: Hot Seat hiding smugly in your brassiness
Under a guise of your so called: 'art and poetic word? ? ? '
All enveloped there in the UK but oh, your actions & tales
Have NOW begun reverberating 'ALL' around the world! ! !

By, Theodora Onken

October 20,2013

This is about years and years of sorrow and victimization
Of living in a 'gold fish bowel' with NO privacy
Always having a way in and a way out(The bad guys)
Altering minds and bodies and emotions
Actors coming into lives to entice...
All for their eventual gain...
This is a World_wide conspiracy...
Great Britain, California, Oregon, Minnesota, New York, Virginia, North Carolina, Florida etc.

Submitted: Sunday, October 20, 2013
Edited: Friday, November 29, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is a true story
It's about being fed up and having ENOUGH! ! ! ! ! ! !
Dedicated to: Elizabeth M. B of Seattle and surrounding areas!

Comments about this poem (The Ruthless~ by Theodora (Theo) Onken )

Enter the verification code :

Read all 2 comments »

Top Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  8. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
    Maya Angelou
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. Invictus
    William Ernest Henley

New Poems

  1. The Art of Praying, Dr John Celes
  2. Auto-Abuse, No Charge, not $7.11 @ 7-11 .., LUVinThe NOW
  3. we won't even have the circus, Mandolyn Davidson
  4. doing donuts in the mojave desert, Mandolyn Davidson
  5. 'Thank You Trees', Christina Sunrise
  6. gurudarsanam-indian thought, dr.k.g.balakrishnan kandangath
  7. Ok so my my girlfiend is a nymphpomaniac, cristobal Benjumea
  8. Your Shot, Your Time, Maverick Jones
  9. Our Very Limited Time, Jeff Gangwer
  10. High-octane Lovers, Simon Quperlier

Poem of the Day

poet Ambrose Bierce

by Ambrose Bierce

Once I dipt into the future far as human eye could see,
And I saw the Chief Forecaster, dead as any one can be--
Dead and damned and shut in Hades as a liar from his birth,
...... Read complete »


Member Poem

by Albert Ahearn

[Hata Bildir]