The Sea Poem by Eddie Roa

The Sea

Rating: 5.0


One sullen day on a beach
I spread my beach towel on the sand
And posed as if in deep musing
But nothing came to my senses
Except the hiss of the sea breeze

I thought the cold of the water
Would stir me up from my lethargy,
I dipped my head twice
But it only numbed me some more.
I could have drowned in its iciness.

Instead I looked at the sea in the eye
And spat out an obscene oath.
If you couldn't solace a spent soul,
You are inutile, you over-rated majesty
Not serving mere man's intentions.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Pandey 12 April 2009

an excellent poem sir.....very well done...10+

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Mifael Llauderes 11 April 2009

it failed me a number of times but i keep coming back...

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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