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The Season's End (1997)

People change with every season
Straying and punishing hard
Turning an innocent little gesture
Into an astonishing discover

Teasing with words
That cut deep as a knife
Knocking you unconscious
Anger Clouding over you

Keep it down
They Always Say
Never let it show
How much things hurt you

This is where we all live
In a cruel and clouded world
Of quiet crime and silent wails
For the Peace of God's Kingdom.

Submitted: Wednesday, March 12, 2008


Comments about this poem (The Season's End (1997) by Lillian B. Rose )

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  • Greenwolfe 1962 (3/12/2008 3:05:00 PM)

    Well I was very impressed with the way you communicated
    your message. You know, communication is what this is
    all about. That's what I tell everyone. I'd like to see every poem rhyme.
    But honestly, as long as they transmit a message to the reader;
    particularly one like this. I couldn't care less. Well, well done.
    I applaud your message particularly.

    GW62

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