The Silence Poem by Laura arwen

The Silence



The silence means
many things but
it is dangerous
Somebody doesn't want
it cause it
provokes the solitude
For me the
silence is very
important cause it
says some information
The silence is
my best friend
cause it understands
my problems and
my intentions
The silence is
an hard project
of our life
Sometimes I'm
afraid for the
silence cause it
makes the horrible
and terrible thoughts
The silence is
a romantic and
soft noise and
sometimes it could
be irksome and
hard
The silence impresses
some people cause
they don't think
the truth and
the real life
The silence induces
the people to
meditate the position
of the life
in the society
I think that
it is important
for ourselves cause
the life without
it mustn't go on
The silence is
a part of
the heart and
of the peace
but for opens
it serves a
key
The silence creates
different personalities
and different styles
The silence is
an incredible and
a sudden way
and a loyal
satisfaction
The silence operates
for love and
for sex

Tuesday, March 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 15 March 2017

Starting with the (beautiful) line SILENCE IS A PART OF THE HEART, over the last 18 lines of your poem, everything you write about silence is positive (I especially like THE SILENCE CREATES DIFFERENT PERSONALITIES AND DIFFERENT STYLES - it is the poet in you that senses and celebrates the creativity of DIFFERENCES - Brava!) . But in the first part of your poem you explore the AMBIGUITY of silence, and reveal its trickster reality, never one thing, never consistently good or evil, constantly changing and startling us. Those insights enrich your poem. You're not afraid of contradictions. Is it because you see them everywhere in the world?

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Laura Arwen 16 March 2017

Yes, I see contradictions everywhere, everyday in every person. I think the life is full of contradictions.

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