Sima Farshid

Freshman - 567 Points (Tehran)

The Sky - Poem by Sima Farshid

Childhood sky is full of stars,
but when you get adult,
wherever you look,
you see just clouds.

Topic(s) of this poem: changing moods

Comments about The Sky by Sima Farshid

  • Gold Star - 40,717 Points Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/4/2015 11:00:00 AM)

    Wonderful, with changing times our vision, our perspective and our preferences also change. Change is the salt of life, with little or no worry sky appears another canvas and we see stars, moon and everything clear as we grow our worries also grow with us and we only see clouds around, you nailed with this poem....Full 10. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,300 Points Anil Kumar Panda (10/4/2015 10:36:00 AM)

    Short and to the point. Keep inking. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 20, 2015

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