***the Snake*** Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

***the Snake***

Rating: 3.4


They called you Diablo -
Dank, dark and hissing -
Sherlock asked 'Watson'
What it was, that you were missing?

April 30, it came and it passed -
Like a Thunderstorm in the Sun -
Lightening strikes near the Rainbow -
In Wonderland, Oz had begun!

Tightly wrapped up, you were -
In a camoflouged lizard-skin purse -
But alas, the spiders, they caught you -
While you, the Warlock of the South, wrote your verse!

Do believe, Emily knows why they call you, Diablo -
For Wicked and Evil, you'd spend your days -
But Emily, upon being released from the hospital -
Was apprised, of your Satanic ways -

It was Sherlock and his 'Watson' -
Who split, your world, open wide -
They identified, your nasty persona -
While Emily, healed inside -

What is it that you are missing?
Why it's forgiveness, compassion and love -
Forever, are you just a doomed snake?
With nary a hint, of our God above?


'Keep Your Windows Locked'
And Your 'Alarms On'...It is getting
Close to Halloween!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theodora Onken 13 October 2007

Why Thank You Ms. Allie. It was a sort of dedication poem. To a J.F. Watson! Your words mean a lot. As always, coming from one so gifted! Theo Xo; 0)

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Alison Cassidy 12 October 2007

This is a thoroughly engaging poem with snippets of well known books that make it extra special (I'm a Sherlock Holmes and Wizard of Oz fan from way back) . You have penned this with a light, almost flirtatious touch. Great poem. love, Allie xxxx

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