THE SNAKE
At the right
UNDER SHELF...silence THERE IN ABOX
ready TO BITE
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ME AND SHE WENT TO THERE
without key ...
BUT FOR ME ALWAYS DARE
NEVER BEEN HYPOCRITE
every thing was clear,
every scene was bright
..one bird and a hen...............patients families,
another couple of snakes but smal were there in the sight..
the small bird was smart, watching there from apart
for a call the other girl did she go
for a one as i guess was snake but little tall
on the desk 254 I did write, no drohan was at all
an error..then a line very light i drew
he was the one whom forced them to put a sign
but for me I refused as I used to with no fight
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WITH NO SOUND MY SCREEM..... HELP AND HELP
NO ONE HEARED AS IT SEEMS
KNOCKING WINDOWS... KNOCKING DOOR
WHILE THE SMALL FLOATING THERE ON THE FLOOR
NO ONE HELPED... NO ONE DARRRRRRRRRRRRE
THE BIG ONE STAYED STILLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
SLOWLY MOVING WANT TO KILLLLLLLLLL
HER STOMACH WANT TO FILLLLLLLLLLL
THEN THE HEN WAS SWALLOWED
my friend was the hen...............my friend was the bell.............
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ONE OF THE BIG CAME
HE WAS WATCHING KILLING GAME
the small one with no tail
while the remained colored pale
EVERY THING TURNED TO HELL
WITH MY SHOES I CRUSHED
MANAGER FACE WAS FLUSHED
The cute bird was smart, watching there from a part
NOW THE BIG READY TO BITE
BUT MY BEACH SHE CAN'T REACH
CAN'T REACH THE MIND HIGHT
as for me always given anti dot
that was my dream yesterday on a flight
my dreams warning me, always right, always hot
NOW I'M READY FOR THE SHOT
not for me..but for her that WHITE... colored black is her DOT
DROHAN254....30/01/07
31/05/09
a dream about a true story..i was the small bird..my friend was the hen...the snakes were the one who made a trap for her, she was a victim, stapped by many as she dared to say no......the same snakes tried many times to kill me but always my dreams warned me and made me ready for any shot................the dream is described exactly as it was.........................................still i have that pain my friend.....
While reading I feel excited, then what is going to be happened... Nicely penned 10+++
mighty rule and small one swallowed. this is what whole world is based on.. good one dear...10
if i were to be asked, this is a warning..hope friends could identify the killer snakes and the house snakes....snakes symbolize enemy, but in the chinese beliefs, snakes are symbols of fortune..me? ..i don't think that snakes are lucky., when it bites, it kills, so why wait for a bite? ..my gosh, , hope your dream is just fine..naizz
that poem/dream was wow...i'm not sure how to describe it...the way you formated the poem...wow...
the snake is presented in very symbolical manner/rich with allusion
Dear Tamara Most poems you full of metaphor. And yes one way of obligation. in the meantime you know to use words. and I invite you to write a comment on my new poem 19522425 - Grieve not ………… thanks.
LADY, YOU CAN WRITE.ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT NEVER B4 HAD I READ A POEM LIKE THAT, N I PROBALY NEVER WILL.UNLESS SOME COPYCAT LOOKING FOR AN OUTRAGIOUS THEME, TO MAKE ONES THOUGHTS N MIND SCREAM, ABOUT YOUR DREAM DOES...BRILLIANT 10S
it is there underneath as well, waiting for the return of the dare of the snake on the floor..you forgets, gracious mother in sand, your feet are bare, buff and safe...iip
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dramatically well penned.........fabulous poem....so expressive in uniqueness...10+++