The Spider And The Fly. Poem by Sandra Feldman

The Spider And The Fly.

Rating: 5.0


What special secrets
In the Spider's Web
Doth, lie
That it can catch
So easily,
The unsuspecting
Fly?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MAHTAB BANGALEE 01 November 2022

web of spider just rules of ambush!

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Sandra Feldman 01 November 2022

I know it's a trap, just wanted to add some mystery and glamor to the Spider's trap.

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David Wood 01 November 2022

Your poem Sandra has many depths that runs through all beings. A Great write….

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 November 2022

Wow! this is a poem with intense thoughts, intricate riddile and full of wisdom.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 November 2022

A full score for the spider's web and the unsuspecting fly. And to my favourite as well

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Sandra Feldman 04 November 2022

Thank you so very much, kind readers, seems that today it's getting harder and harder to escape the Spiders' traps. So take care and watch out.

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Smoky Hoss 03 November 2022

Mary Oliver in her book 'Upstream' wrote a short story concerning her encounter with a spider in such a thoughtful manner as you've presented us here. If you get a chance read her story, it is, as your poetry, beautiful in the scope of it's incredible vision.

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Smoky Hoss 03 November 2022

I love how you open the veil into the 'other' world, the 'thin-places' as the mystics say, and give us cause to look, ponder, and see one of the mysteries of the Cosmos. Brilliant, beautiful and sublime.

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Nabakishore Dash 02 November 2022

Truth revealed in this small poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 November 2022

Sandra, you have indeed added mystery and glamour to the trap set by the spider's web. And so very timely!

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