The Story Of A King: 04 - The King's Dream Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Story Of A King: 04 - The King's Dream

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In His life so short
He reigned for generations four
Kept Him ever ready
on the bed of slumber, steady
for merchants of dreams to adore.



Years after years did pass
budgets after budgets, framed and named
to whisper the song of wealth
to prosper the wheel of health
for a few though, He set a new trend.


The trend of speaking less
on behalf of our king's face
charioteered the wheel of time
made all to sing His valour in rhyme
and none to utter, how much they got less.


Our king had cherished a dream
to see His men strong and sing the lore.
He wanted to abolish cries,
complains and discontent in voices-
of hungry, thirsty, unemployed and many more.

The Story Of A King: 04 - The King's Dream
Tuesday, November 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: insensitivity,kingdom,lifestyle,royalty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A king of a state should have his own senses, eyes and ears to see and hear the sufferings of his fellow people. But rarely do they have it. And nobody understands the dire reality that a king lives with.
The royal life has little to do with the sufferings of his people.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 15 November 2017

Our king had cherished a dream to see His men strong and sing the lore. He wanted to abolish cries, complains and discontent in voices- of hungry, thirsty, unemployed and many more. In stead of abolishing hunger or thirst the king dreamt of abolishing the hungry and the thirsty. Well expressed. 10++++++

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Alina Kaikeyi 15 November 2017

The trend of speaking less on behalf of our king's face charioteered the wheel of time made all to sing His valour in rhyme and none to utter, how much they got less. A king of a state should have his own senses, eyes and ears to see and hear the sufferings of his fellow people. But rarely do they have it. And nobody understands the dire reality that a king lives with. Nice poem shared.10++++

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Sabita Sahoo 15 November 2017

He wanted to abolish cries, complains and discontent in voices- of hungry, thirsty, unemployed and many more. In stead of abolishing hunger or thirst the king dreamt of abolishing the hungry and the thirsty. Well expressed. 10++++++

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Anita Aparajita Das 15 November 2017

A king of a state should have his own senses, eyes and ears to see and hear the sufferings of his fellow people. But rarely do they have it. And nobody understands the dire reality that a king lives with. Nice poem shared.10++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 15 November 2017

He wanted to abolish cries, complains and discontent in voices- of hungry, thirsty, unemployed and many more. In stead of abolishing hunger or thirst the king dreamt of abolishing the hungry and the thirsty. Well expressed. 10++++

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 15 November 2017

Our king had cherished a dream to see His men strong and sing the lore. He wanted to abolish cries, complains and discontent in voices- of hungry, thirsty, unemployed and many more. The royal life has little to do with the sufferings of his people. 10++++

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Sonali Parida 15 November 2017

Years after years did pass budgets after budgets, framed and named to whisper the song of wealth to prosper the wheel of health for a few though, He set a new trend. The royal life has little to do with the sufferings of his people. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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