The Stranger Poem by Contessa Neal

The Stranger

Rating: 5.0


'What is wrong with me, ' I think as I stare at a
beauty from afar. Can you feel it as my eyes pierce
though your soul reavealing yourself to me. The intensity
of my eyes rise as you look up and your eyes meet
mine. For a moment I am blinded by your nature.
Someone please call for help, because you just set
my soul on fire. The burning increases with every
blink of desire. Can this be true? Really am I falling
for a stranger with eyes from the heavons that can
break you apart if you dare to stare. Or is this
a allusion drawing me in with intensified rays
of pure beauty and pain. I'm losing myself but it's
you that gain, slowly but surely I'm going insane.
The tension is building with each moment in
time, a stare so senually it should be a crime.
It only lasted a few moments but i wish
it were more, but the bell rings and the
beauty leaves through the door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashley Davis 10 August 2009

wow very deep writing! loved it give it a 10! keep writing your very good! ! !

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Catrina Heart 10 August 2009

fine internal rhymes and diction...fine craft! ! ! Thanks........loved it!

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