The Sun God Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

The Sun God

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Blue Sky! !
White clouds!
Lovely day,
Very hot! ! ! !
With the heat of the sun,
The Sun God.

High Temperatures!
Sweating,
Muse of the heat on mankind;
The Sun God in action! !
Able to control the daughters of Hillel.

Look around you,
You will see their nakedness! !
And understand what i mean;
The heat! The heat! !
Muse of the Sun God,
Sunshine! ! ! !
Higher temperatures,
And the daughters of Hillel are seen naked;
Among us,
Claiming to be dressed.

Questions and answers,
Knowing what is right and, wrong! !
Because of the heat they are naked,
In the eyes of the public;
Will you allow your daughters to be dressed like this? !
Being naked in the eyes of the public.

Friday, May 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: effect,humanity,nakedness,poetry,realistic,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2020

Heat! ! Exposure, Nakedness, Mankind on earth. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2020

Nakedness! ! In the eyes of the people.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 May 2020

Sun God knows what is right and what is wrong. Sun God motivates life giving temperature. Sun motivates humanity giving us energy and light. This poem is excellently and brilliantly penned.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 May 2020

High Temperatures! Sweating, Muse of the heat on mankind; The Sun God in action! ! Able to control the daughters of Hillel......wonderful expression

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