The Sustenance Poem by Braja K Sarkar

The Sustenance

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I look forward to
The bright path
Paved up to the
Distant hill.

I am a blind traveller,
Have dragged on a narrow passage
Through the thorny bushes.

I have nothing but
The creepers and grassess and
A vile grain of corn as my
Means to the end.

A radiant horseman running steadily and
Off and on breaks
The sound of the plunging hoofs........

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 29 July 2009

Very poetic...I liked all of it.

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Anjali Sinha 18 July 2009

oooops! ! ! I love the sound of the plunging hooves inspite of all those grassy curves and creepy bushes I must say you ran the race well--- nice poem dear Braja and all the best -10 anjali

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a warm wise thoughtful poem..i loved it..is that you my friend...

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