A yellow river flows
Through my bloods.
I know the colours of the rain
And how the blue bloods often
Turn into spoiled grains!
All roads lead to the destiny
Unknown.....
Yellow river inside me
Flows silently,
It never meets the sea
I have ever known.......
Mind boggling metaphor.... 10+ Read mine.. 'Twisted Sunset'...
Mystic imagery ‘Yellow river inside me’ Wow! Ten+ Ms. Nivedita. UK Please find new posts and looking for your comments. niv
nice complex (cognitive, visual) metaphor: ''Yellow river inside me Flows silently, '' of this wonderful poem.......10
'Yellow river inside me Flows silently, It never meets the sea I have ever known.'...... mysterious river runs deep in your veins..
an interesting beautiful poem..with beautiful images..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very gripping...........