The Thrush - 0064 - Initial Version Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

The Thrush - 0064 - Initial Version



Desolate destruction, spot fire bombs fall,
A timid thrush now worms beside one wall.

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Rewritten as haiku 11 April 2010

Haiku - 0064 - Crushed Thrush Hushed - Current Version
Cluster bombs' free fall
breed desolate destruction:
timid thrush, one wall.

The number in the title refers to the chronological order of the first version unless the poem was omitted from the original list and rediscovered. Revised versions retain the initial number.

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