The Trinity Poem by C. P. Sharma

The Trinity

Rating: 5.0


He is the creator,
You are the nourisher,
I am the destroyer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 August 2009

beautiful sir...you have combined the three...'he'...'you'...and 'i' on which you had already written seperately...and this short poem defines the three in 3 lines and how they are connected.....

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Alison Cassidy 10 August 2009

The circularity of life expressed with wisdom and without clutter. Impressive poetry. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Raj Nandy 20 December 2009

For the Western world the Father, the Son and the Holy Ghost are all the same! And so is Bramha, Vishnu & Maheshwar, - though with different names, they unite to form the eternal cosmic chain! A GOOD HAIKU with a perfect ten! -Raj

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Sandra Fowler 13 August 2009

Deep thoughts become the quality poet. Write on. Always your friend, Sandra

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Irene Clark-hogg 12 August 2009

I think you are also a creator. You present us with such beautiful words containing so much meaning. Irene

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Bonnie Collins 11 August 2009

You have a very good way with expressing very strong statements with very few words, very powerfull and to the point.... Excellent.... bonnie

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Ana Zaldivar 11 August 2009

Wow.. So short but with a really strong meaning... He, you, and I.. expressed with wisdom of the world.. Incredible..

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C. P. Sharma

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Bissau, Rajasthan
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