The Truth Poem by Raven Keller

The Truth

Rating: 4.0


Theres no sense in running
You cant hide from the nightmare forever
Don't you feel the breathe of death?
Don't you understand that you'll never get better?

Can you feel the world watching?
Accusing eyes, plotting your demise
Can you tell that no ones listening?
No gentle hand, to help you stand

Learn to laugh when you're fading
Learn to lie when you're in pain
Learn to smile when you're drowning
Learn to be pretend when you're no longer sane

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gregory Gunn 14 January 2006

Raven, Have an eye for spelling such as Dont should be Don't and breathe in this case should be breath. I know it is nit-picking but editors are sticklers for that sort of thing. Once again, not too shabby so what the heck are you talking about in your bio about your writing. If you stay the course, you will evolve into what you now only wish you could be. Gregory

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Holly Heron 29 December 2005

Raven, this is brilliant! ! ! it's goin in my favourites, k? i'm adding that poem i wanted you to see to mine so please read. love you. holly spelling error drowing-drowning.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 24 December 2005

Very strong and on-target!

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