The Truth Can Hurt Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

The Truth Can Hurt

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The truth can hurt

Some writers write infrequently
and others write prolifically.
What matters is the quality
much more so than the quantity.

Good writers by their words display
their thoughts in a coherent way
Describing things they have observed
and garner praise that’s well deserved.

But some think anything will do
and they pay no attention to
the rules successful writers use
they will not learn: point blank refuse

to accept well meant critique.
They much prefer dishonest praise
from so called friends afraid
to speak the simple truth lest they dismay

their friend by speaking honestly.
So naturally they take offence
when other people criticise
that which seems perfect in their eyes.

True writers take this in their stride
they know their work is not perfect.
But what they know is they have tried
and that is all you can expect.

New writers lack experience
but everyone must start some where.
The wise ones do not take offence
when other people show they care

enough to offer some advice.
Because they can remember when
they too were just a new novice
to painting pictures with their pen.
27 feb 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Pruchnicki 01 March 2008

ivor - would that more writers wrote less and more coherently! There's no law in prosody that says one must write incoherently! This does not mean that a poem cannot be complex and difficult at first reading!

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Thad Wilk 29 February 2008

Nice poem Ivor! Good advice also! ! I see a new novice punched you in a 3 guess he didn't want any needed advice! ? *10*! ! ! Friend Thad

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