The Uninvited Guest ~ Part 2 Poem by M. Asim Nehal
The Uninvited Guest ~ Part 2
I learned the true meaning of possessiveness,
envy and jealousy and never liked
others seeing or talking with him
such was the impact I had of His love.
First time in life I realized;
That the nights are lonely and lengthy,
The sleep rests on a pillow,
The ceiling fan throws an arrow,
And the clock does a cat walk
on my patience's ramp.
The true meaning of
The three letter word - 'JOY'.
Appeared to me like revealed by Love God
The closed top with the tilted bottom of 'J'
And the complete world in 'O'
The single heart at the base
With two entities on top 'Y'
The whole world looked so different.
You use liked to link that line with the next that together with the other made one union, but the coherence is not good. The rest of the poem deviates from the starting theme of it. This poem is not altogether clear.
I liked your conception of possesiveness one has in love for the JOY one acquires. I liked how you creatively conceived Joy's elaboration. I liked it.
There are definitely lessons to be learned here. Brilliantly written.
' ' The ceiling fan throws and arrow and the clock does a cat walk, .', beautiful lines from an amazing storyk
Nothing last for long and for ever. See the life of Bill Gates, recently the uninvited wife separated from him and only he knows how painful it is...
Mind blowing series, I am sure next would be the heart-break and pain. You have justified the love in every form Dear Poet.
Have ro come back to finish the series. Fantastic read. To my Poem List.
There are too much to be said but my comments are being aborted by the system that it is hard to write without disturbing the flow of thoughts.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/27/2024 9:53:17 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Joy of life and love nicely explained.5Stars