I do not wish to think,
as though all was
beautiful a dream,
and You, my fine Museget, -
the voluntary hostage
ruthless of impatience
and a gossip of the moon...
25/04/08
what a unique way to imagine the expression of poetry....the unusual soon becomes soul soothing as is this one....
ruthless of impatience and a gossip of the moon -------------- He is an unusual hostage- he seems to be there to shape phenomenon forms over the moon ashes and waves. Illusions will colapse at the time he injects Sutra into gossip veins.....for at least 500 years, mankind will remember him. Roland.
i love the idea of a 'voluntary hostage'. I suppose we all are in our different ways. very affecting poem. Fx
It's really too obscure for the reader. This harms the message. The kind of thing a poet loves and a reader hates. GW62
Voluntary hostage! What a luring usage! All poets are unusual voluntary hostages… Tsira, yours this poem makes you a prominent one! A ten!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the unusual write is usually meaningful and nice to read.