The Way I Feel N The Way You Receive... Poem by Sheel Patel

The Way I Feel N The Way You Receive...



Walking in the early morning
Crushing the fresh grass under my feet
I looked back....you were there
Just following my steps
So the more grass don’t have to suffer! ! ! !
Curling your rough hair away from your eyes
To have a better look at me...
I started walking reverse…..
So that we can bridge our gap a little...
The flow of wind was towards you,
But it passes through me

I closed my eyes
The smell of sunlight tried to ruffle me
But it was not that easy for the Sun to beat me
You laughed suddenly....I heard it
I felt you heard what I just thought
You speeded up to catch me
I thought you have finally decided
I stopped..........for you
And you began your last sprint
I felt the wind was restricting you
But you were so determined...I smiled for that
When you were close enough
You looked so patient……I wonder why?
I saw dried tear lines down on your cheeks
Making it more red than pink! ! ! !

But now, it was the time for me
I took a deep breath and held you in my arms
You threw your balance but I was very strong
To hold you up....with me
There was no free space between us now
You tried to breathe again...with me
I made it more easy.....with my mouth! ! ! ! !

copyright ©® Sheel Patel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 06 March 2009

wowwwww really beautiful -10 anjali (do read mine A TWILIGHT SONG)

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