The Way The World Ends (Finaly Done) Poem by alexis aka alex

The Way The World Ends (Finaly Done)



i have walked the edge of the abyss and i have seen
the way all our lifes shall end
your poet eliet had it wrong
there will be no bang
only a wimper
the place you stand now will be your tomb
let us fight all we want
we stand no chance
aginst the comming fire
for the sufice of are world shal burn to glass
so live life whil you can or have regrets when cassed into the shadow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

hmmm..... really interesting... i do admit, i enjoyed it more the second time... keep it up.

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Kairi Chiruda 11 April 2009

lovely..in a morbid sense...that i like! ! ! make you want to read it twice! ! keep writing! !

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Candace Quinton 06 February 2009

keep it up its good so far

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please finish it. thus far it is going great

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