The Way To Enlightenment Poem by Jürgen Wagner

The Way To Enlightenment

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A young man sought a Zen master's guide
'How long does it last', he eagerly cried
Till I find freedom and peace of mind
Till I'm enlightened, compassionate and kind? '

'Perhaps ten years, ' the master replied
'But if I trie hard, how many will abide? '
'In that case it could take two decades! '
'But I really take hardship at any grades! '

The master looked at him eagle-eyed
'In this case it would be the longest ride
I forecast you fourty long years arriving
If you don't let go your effort and striving'

The Way To Enlightenment
Wednesday, December 20, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: enlightenment,be free,being free,endeavour,way,liberation,liberty,compassion,master,hardship,time,years
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem based on a Zen story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Freni Karaluthara 20 December 2023

Your use of poetic language and the allegory of the young man seeking guidance from the Zen master beautifully encapsulates the trials and tribulations one might face on the path to self-realization.

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Jürgen Wagner 27 January 2024

Thanks a lot!

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Freni Karaluthara 20 December 2023

Dear Poet, I recently had the pleasure of reading your poem, 'The Way To Enlightenment, ' and I must commend you on capturing the essence of the spiritual journey towards enlightenment in such a thought-provoking manner.

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