When I am here
Walking alone near
They don't see you walking
Along with me, oh my dear.
When they follow me
They don't see the halo
Of you circling me around
My face and looks, oh my dear.
When they surround me
They don't feel the real
Vibrations of our intense
Desire in the air, oh my dear
When I talk to them
They can't hear my inner
Voice, soft and calm, that is
Of love, is tuned for you, my dear
When I take my breath
They don't identify that
You are close to me, than
My deeper pulses, oh my dear
When I am dissolved again
In the deep thinking mood
They don't know about the vast
Ocean of feelings in me, my dear.
Cont....2 One version of my interpretation is what I felt like and the other one could be your lover is conversing with you and telling I am so beautiful that all eyes are on me and people are fascinated by my charm to such an extent that they don't see you exist or they ignore your presence.5 Stars
Another fantastic poem on love. We in human form have some inherent and inbuilt qualities we have conscience, which guides us to the right and the correct path, whereas we also have devil who try to deviate us from the correct path and love has to pass through this test. What others see in us is what they are hence time and again we struggle to make them realise what we are. This is a thought provoking poem and can be interpreted in different ways.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
When I take my breath They don't identify that You are close to me, than My deeper pulses, oh my dear ....the utmost love....excellent expression