They'Ll B Sorry When Im Gone Poem by silenced one

They'Ll B Sorry When Im Gone

Rating: 5.0


Im tired of not being taken seriously
to them everything i say is a joke
but on day when they cant wake me
my motive they'd wish they had known

they'll cry and beg why
i never said anything
to ignorant to realize
i did, they just werent listening

without a sound the ambulance will arrive
theres no need for sirens, i already died
its no longer an emergency, its to late to save my life
they should of known this would happen
they have no right to be surprised

in comes the stretcher, i swear theyll never forget
that i told them 'when i do it it will be more that an attempt'
If i cant succeed in life i will surely succeed at death
dont apologize for not listening, you're wasting your breath

the stretcher is pushed to my room
where my stiff body lies
and they'll know that its never too soon
for a sixteen year old to die

in a bag they'll zip me inside
forever knowing that i never once lied
into the ambulance i will go
the same way i came into this world:
deeply and utterly alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Kerr 13 February 2009

Very good, I feel like I know where you are coming from. Now on the positive side can you write a poem to show the world that they can't beat you down. I'm saying this just because of how convincing it sounds.

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Mandy Bullman 13 February 2009

i like your poem a lot straight to the point nicely written

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Beth Whittaker 13 February 2009

The last two lines are my favorite.

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