They Melt With All The Gods Poem by Altair Laahad

They Melt With All The Gods

Rating: 4.3


He wrapped her within his soft breath
that flowed like winds
from a remote paradise

while she tucked him in her bed of roses
where dunes of warmth act
like a fire crafted in the midway
between the kingdom of heaven
and the realm of the hells
conceived to defrost the coolest
and stubbornest iceberg

There, a bird falls from the sky
into the pink flower
that blossoms as a butterfly
fluttering to reach the zenith;
they swirl and twirl and dance
and melt with all the gods

In the meanwhile,
a volcano of pleasure erupts
and disrupts the vision of the earth citizens
who remain behind blind
screens of fear

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this was written after reading 'last gods' by Galway Kinnel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 14 May 2013

Hello Poet, i have to search the Last Gods, I dont knew neither the author nor the poem. But your Poem follows the same secret, nature and man, love and sensuality, so subtly described. Very hot! Loved it!

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nice poem, very powerful and sentimental.

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