They Noticed Poem by Whispering Rose

They Noticed

Rating: 5.0


I was looking at all of them
Some holding hands and others saying a poem
And there she set under a big tree
Reading her book and feeling free
There was a peaceful calm
But it all goes away once they come
She asked for some respect
But that's what she shouldn't expect
He, then, approached and apologized
She didn't care and thought they should've realized
It was her talks and laughs
Which made him wish it would last
It was his sense and kindness
Which made her restless?
They noticed that they were so much in love
So how can they now leave them alone?
I stood there watching them together
He held her hand and said we'll stay for ever
She wanted to cry because she knew it was a lie
And yet she smiled and said good bye
Each one of them went in a different way
But they didn't know that their hearts would stay
Tears in her little eyes didn't dry
But she hid them and decided to try
He pretended not to care
But his heart was tearing apart for being sad
It was hard
But they both tried
Days and nights passed by
They thought it would soon fade away
On the cross roads they met
But not much was said
Tears and laughter, Sadness and joy
Made them realize what’s real
The tow were seen
Happier than they have never been
They said it’s not worth fighting for
But they proved them wrong
And love survived once more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cain XXX 02 July 2010

simply awesome. the narration was excellent. it really drew out the emotions of the characters. i enjoyed it very much. thanks for sharing!

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Kesav Easwaran 20 May 2010

'Each one of them went in a different way But they didn't know that their hearts would stay' these lines constitute the soul of this love scene poem...good narration Rose...reads like cinematic dialogue...10

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 26 January 2010

Thanks for writing this one.. i like it.

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