Thinking Is Dangerous Poem by thomas coltrin

Thinking Is Dangerous

Rating: 3.8


I'm thinking about you and slowly I smile
I’m thinking about you, the numbers I dial,
I’m thinking about you, I tell u a few words
I’m thinking about you, and sometimes it hurts,
I’m thinking about you, I want to know why
I’m thinking about you, the feeling will never die,
I’m thinking about you, the small memories we had
I’m thinking about you, and how fast they all passed,
I’m thinking about you, and the kiss we never had
I’m thinking about you but yet I’m relaxed,
I’m thinking about you, and this message by MySpace
I’m thinking about you, and how it screams in my face,
I’m thinking about you, so I can be with u
I’m thinking about you, and that is the truth,
I’m thinking about you, as I pick up the gun
I’m thinking about you, as I put it back down,
I’m thinking about you, this is the story I tell
I’m thinking about you, you make me rebel.
I’m thinking about people and all my friends
I’m thinking about people and how it all ends
If you haven’t got the message, let me make it simple
Three little words that makes all the difference,
I love u

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amy Douglass (Fifita) 12 September 2009

the endings a bit cliche, but otherwise it was beautiful.

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