This Heavenly Place Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

This Heavenly Place

Rating: 4.9


The bees and the butterflies mingled,
On that beautiful summer's day,
The sky looked as blue as the ocean,
Not a single cloud got in its way.
The daisies invited the sunshine,
To glow on their petals of white.
And there in the wonderful garden,
Opened up with a burst of delight,
Some birds flocked just right near the river,
Their calls of excitement were heard,
They gave a grand swoop with such vigour,
A wonderful gathering of birds.
A day oh so fine,
In this garden of mine,
There's nothing nicer than that,
A grand little haven,
To enjoy, and to love,
To nature, I take off my hat.

Jayne Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 15 February 2022

Such a wonderful poem on beautiful nature. Thanks for sharing. Loved it.

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Jayne Davies 15 February 2022

Thank you for your comment.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 February 2022

a truly wonderful description of paradise

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David Wood 15 February 2022

A lovely description of the summer we are all looking forward to.

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Ruta Mohapatra 17 February 2022

You are lucky to have such a beautiful garden, Jayne!

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Jayne Davies 18 February 2022

Many thanks x

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Anjandev Roy 17 February 2022

Glorious piece....thank u....

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 16 February 2022

Heavenly nature mesmerises everybody everybody; superbly penned

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 February 2022

A wonderful gathering of birds. A day oh so fine, In this garden of mine....lovely expression...thoroughly poetic...top score!

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Jayne Davies 15 February 2022

Thank you so much everyone! x

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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