This Is The World I Want To Live In Poem by Maria Mitea

This Is The World I Want To Live In

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I want to live in a world,
where I can smile,
I want to live in a world,
where I can cry,

I want to live in a world where,
when I cry, there are people,
there out are people that see me crying,
and these people that see me crying,
they come and hug me,
and I hug them back when I am crying,
they come and hug me,
with all their heart.

This is the world
I want to live in.

I want to live in a world where,
when I smile, there are people,
there out are people that see me smiling,
and these people that see me smiling,
they give me their own smile,
and we smile together,
and we together laugh,
from all our heart,
we together cheer up.

This is the world
I want to live in.

Tuesday, November 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 24 November 2020

This too shall happen. And we're very close to it happening. The pandemic will change us for the better. Beautiful poem, Maria!

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Maria Mitea 29 November 2020

I deeply appreciate your time and writing a comment, R! All my gratitute!

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Maria Mitea 29 November 2020

Thank you, R! I deeply appreciate you reading and supporting it with your comment!

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 November 2020

I want to live in a world, where I can smile, I want to live in a world, where I can cry, i want to be free i want to be myself. i shall never be a slave of anyone. fine thoughts. tony

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Maria Mitea 29 November 2020

Thank you, Dr T! I deeply appreciate you reading and supporting it!

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Koffi B Sossou 30 October 2023

How shall we live in that perfect world when divisions arise from everywhere? Religion, race, tribe, identity...

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Koffi B Sossou 30 October 2023

Here is the thing. The more you expect from people, the more you hurt yourself.

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Koffi B Sossou 30 October 2023

The desire is perfect, but the reality is different.

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Thomas Case 05 March 2023

superb poem Maria

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Rob Lamberton 11 December 2022

Kindness and compassion make for a great world. Thank you sharing from the heart!

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